Recent Comments

Boi4U
7/15/19, 2:58 PM
OMG! HOT AS HELL! This is a near perfect smut story. Derek's going from arrogant pussy chaser, yuk... lol, to a prime, grade-A cum guzzling, cock slut extraordinare football player stud, the big man on campus, was a well written journey. Some stuff, such as the nipple clamps *yikes* and the chasity device *ugh* are not my thing, but, your clever use of them in the story was brilliant and fit in smoothly as training devices to aid turning Derek into the perfect lil' bottom bitch, submissive jock he was born to be. Now, this is not a criticism per se, but the reason I wrote this was near perfect is that I was a bit disappointed that you didn't include a scintillating sex scene with Derek and his English teacher (and the possible fuck orgy I thought would happen). I also was hoping for Derek in his jockstrap getting pounced and plowed. Otherwise, you created a mighty fine homoerotic fantasy feast for our eyes and minds. Thanks and high fives. 😆😉👏👅👍
XyZ
7/15/19, 1:08 PM
Great story and all, but Jesus Christ...anything but this text. Its impossible to read. Sorry.
Chris
7/15/19, 12:21 PM
Please, continue the story
Apr 11, 2019
Anonymous
7/15/19, 11:43 AM
For me, this was just weird. The story shows you got one hella funky and vivid imagination, so don't let anything hold you back from writing.
Anonymous
7/15/19, 11:27 AM
If whoever wrote this is still on this site - please continue this!!!
Martin
7/15/19, 7:54 AM
This is such a great story with so much potential to take it further with additional stories! Can't stop coming back to this one!
Lust Stallion
7/15/19, 4:30 AM
loving it! lovetheseries. you two are such a great teamas writers. the random dude transformation is my favourite elememt of your stories, & i love what you do with
Lusty stallion
7/15/19, 4:20 AM
as ever man I love your work!
Jul 13, 2019
7/14/19, 10:45 PM
It wasvery cute!
a new fan!
7/14/19, 9:47 PM
Really enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing your work. I'm especially struck by how well you captured the historical elements and feeling in the piece. Your writing is clear, well-structured, and beautifully descriptive. I will definitely read more of your work. Thanks, again. You have a new fan!