Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/12/19, 2:12 PM
really hope we get a new chapter of this soon
Anonymous
7/12/19, 1:03 PM
Very hot and sexy. Great job
7/12/19, 12:51 PM
So detailed and deeply felt. Intensely involving, even though it doesn't mesh up with my fetishes. I've never been able to get to the end before, if you know what I mean.
tfenthusiest
7/12/19, 9:31 AM
this was really amazing and i wish there was more !
Anonymous
7/12/19, 8:22 AM
this was good! A demon story with a twist :- )
Anonymous
7/12/19, 4:19 AM
This whole series is just so freaking great, and the setup gives so much room to play around with. Thanks.
Anonymous
7/12/19, 4:03 AM
For a first story, very good. The writing was a bit clunky, but inventive and able to maintain interest. I thought the descriptive aspects were too complex and a bit difficult to follow, possibly simplify them and let the reader 'fill-in' the gaps. Definitely generated some *stirring* below, I look forward to future writings!
The Author
7/12/19, 3:54 AM
Thanks guys for all the interesting comments. This story was intended to be funny and it was something of an experiment. I personally have never given a name to my penis, seems a bit silly to me, so "Mister Mister" just worked. Keep in mind that Mark is the quintessential 30-something millennial man--works out (cross-fit no less!), is college-educated, respects (?!) women, accepts alternative lifestyles (LGBT), etc., etc., etc., but when faced with something that he can't even imagine he is thrown for a loop and the result is comical. That said, I really need to stop writing screenplays; i.e., all that dialog, and try some stream-of-consciousness stuff.
rubaluva
7/12/19, 3:43 AM
Brilliant story! Blackmail is fantastic :)
Anonymous
7/12/19, 3:38 AM
yes. convert those chunky thick men.