Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/12/19, 8:22 AM
this was good! A demon story with a twist :- )
Anonymous
7/12/19, 4:19 AM
This whole series is just so freaking great, and the setup gives so much room to play around with. Thanks.
Anonymous
7/12/19, 4:03 AM
For a first story, very good. The writing was a bit clunky, but inventive and able to maintain interest. I thought the descriptive aspects were too complex and a bit difficult to follow, possibly simplify them and let the reader 'fill-in' the gaps. Definitely generated some *stirring* below, I look forward to future writings!
The Author
7/12/19, 3:54 AM
Thanks guys for all the interesting comments. This story was intended to be funny and it was something of an experiment. I personally have never given a name to my penis, seems a bit silly to me, so "Mister Mister" just worked. Keep in mind that Mark is the quintessential 30-something millennial man--works out (cross-fit no less!), is college-educated, respects (?!) women, accepts alternative lifestyles (LGBT), etc., etc., etc., but when faced with something that he can't even imagine he is thrown for a loop and the result is comical. That said, I really need to stop writing screenplays; i.e., all that dialog, and try some stream-of-consciousness stuff.
rubaluva
7/12/19, 3:43 AM
Brilliant story! Blackmail is fantastic :)
Anonymous
7/12/19, 3:38 AM
yes. convert those chunky thick men.
gymini29
7/12/19, 2:51 AM
i can't tell if he won or lost???
theDirtySpiders
7/12/19, 1:47 AM
I know this stuff is "basically wank fodder on the internet" But I just wanted to pass on that this story, the caliber of writing is really something that I found impressive. Great work. It has inspired me to try harder.
Anonymous
7/12/19, 1:46 AM
An enjoyable read! I can't wait to see who he converts next. A handsome guard? A stocky blacksmith? Or perhaps someone else entirely! I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
7/11/19, 11:58 PM
Love this. Love that you're mixing things up, both narratively and transformation wise. The humor was on point, and my twin appreciated the "don't fuck your twin" part, though i did not read him the addendum on that 😋