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Anonymous
7/10/19, 9:49 AM
Hoooot
Anonymous
7/10/19, 9:45 AM
This is great! Maybe a bit complicated and just slightly drawn out, but still a quality story
rubaluva
7/10/19, 8:53 AM
Very enjoyable story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anonymous
7/10/19, 7:07 AM
loved this!
Martin
7/10/19, 6:16 AM
Beardful, You can still edit your stories, including the series name, with the edit link that was sent to you when you submitted your story. You did enter a valid email address, didn't you? If not, you just make your own life that much harder. If you're concerned about privacy and anonymity, I suggest getting an email address at one of the endless anon email providers on the net. And while you're at it, you might want to consider to use that address to create an account here as well, since again that'll make much easier for you as an author - and you'd get to see how well you're stories are doing with the readers.
SpeedoLuver
7/10/19, 5:40 AM
He got his just desserts, lol. Cheaters never prosper, and in this story, this cheater got his man-pussy drilled, and his mind fucked... 'butt' good. I'd l❤ve to view that sexy, diabolical video. The master needs to go to TLA Releasing to see if they'd like to sell it. Bestseller alert, lol. 😉😛👅
Anonymous
7/10/19, 5:19 AM
Unfortunately when I posted the second chapter I made a mistake and wrote the name of the series wrong! I called it URSIFACTOR so its not linked in the series. I'm kind of frustrated because it is now incomplete. But you can read it currently in page five so you can follow Ed's complete transformation. I'll be more careful in the next chapters.
7/10/19, 5:08 AM
WoW you have a delicious narrative, smooth as silk. I love it. I liked how gentle and considerate Ramses is, it is not common in stories of domination, but I like nice and sweet characters like him, and somehow it felt that the approach of Matt to Ramses was very tender. >w<
SpeedosLuver
7/10/19, 4:59 AM
I would enjoy more, but you did inform us this was from a commissioned work thus you basically gave us the intro, leaving us to use our imaginations to take the story in the direction we want. I personally love the 39 year old straight stud wearing a speedo under his board shorts. That's what I do, because not only are they the perfect under layer vs. underwear for board shorts, but come on, speedos on straight hunky daddy types are to die for. Figuratively, lol. So, I imagine our sexy 'victim' of the Dr. Strange type hypnotist sucks his new masters cock while dressed only in his speedo, with his hot ass, hips and huge boner straining that ultra thin lycra/spandex/nylon fabric of those skintight speedo racer briefs. Once the hot husband has his oral virginity taken care of, swallowing *gulp* his masters tasty load, the time 'cums' for his steamy virgin man-cunt to be cherry popped then bred... ... ... 👅👅👅
Jul 1, 2019
Anonymous
7/10/19, 4:17 AM
Not short stories. Again these are a few paragraphs with no real expositon.