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7/5/19, 11:06 PM
interesting, although a little cruel for my taste...
7/5/19, 10:51 PM
Agreed; perhaps a change in style; the scenario's next chapter narrated from the Player's perspective.
7/5/19, 10:27 PM
Well done...full circle/
7/5/19, 10:12 PM
Some "Behind the Scenes" Realness: In the early 2000's, I worked as Doorman (and later Manager) at a straight bar -- a brass rail and dark wood kind of place. I loved the job itself, but it was very weird to spend my weekends with a bunch of drunk straight people. Ick. Anyway, one of the bartenders was a beauty of a straight man, muscular and handsome and choreographed hair -- the (many) women he bedded all spoke of his... generous endowment. It would've been easy to hate him if he hadn't been such a genuinely nice guy -- and completely NOT homophobic. At all. We became friends because we both wore Playboy Bunny t-shirts to a company function -- his was sincere, mine said "I read the articles" -- that was also the moment he realized I was gay. Honestly, it was like he figured out his first Nancy Drew mystery before the end -- it was totally precious. How could I not love him? And how long do you think it was before I was sucking his dick? True, one drunken Saturday night after-hours in the manager's office -- while I was supposed to be counting out the cash -- he was bragging on how big he was, so of course, I'm all like, "Shut up or prove it!" And he did -- whipped it out, got it hard -- and it was pretty damn big. One of the biggest I'd ever seen -- and I've seen a few. Pretty, too... (He shaved his entire self smooth. That's what I'm talking about... straight boys who manscape, right? But he definitely got off on me getting off on him.) That night was the first -- of many -- blow jobs I gave him. Always out of the blue, always after drinking, but he gave me that dick a LOT.... I kept trying to fuck him. I really wanted him to want me to -- he let me finger his hole and I rimmed him once or twice, but it never happened. What an ass he had, too. Oh, woof. I always figured if I'd been as built as him, he would've let me. (Another reason to lift...) So he became the Bartender from Maryland in this series (and one of the NEW SUPERMEN in that series) and you can read some interesting shit into his story arc when you know where he came from. Note how he goes from the hottest of them pre-transformation to the least of them post. Interesting.
Lusty Stallion
7/5/19, 9:44 PM
this has to be my all-time favorite story man. the idea of many guys pushing their reality changing desires onto a few guys is genius. some have tried similar stories, but this is the cream of the crop man!
Fagboy
7/5/19, 9:25 PM
their are 17 parts on literotica to this story.... i need more
Anonymous
7/5/19, 9:01 PM
Please keep him aware! If it is removed, then the story becomes the same as eveyone else's and loses its uniqueness!
Anonymous
7/5/19, 8:57 PM
This is incredible, and I can't wait to see more!
Anonymous
7/5/19, 8:43 PM
This was really good but idk why, but this story gave me wattpad author vibes lol. Nothing wrong with that though.
tiny tim
7/5/19, 8:28 PM
I wish the author would NOW REMOVE THE KNOWLEDGE from the 'slave', roommate that he has been brainwashed, allowing him to begin to think this is his evolving natural behavior.....