Recent Comments

Martin
7/3/19, 8:06 PM
For what it's worth, I found the whole story extremely hot. There could have been more sex, but the actual story was great, including the ending. But I agree that the world you've created has so much more potential for stories and backgrounds that it seems a waste to close it up with that surprising and shocking (but still very hot) ending. That people think it's sad is just a testimony how well you managed to describe the characters (Alvo) so people feel with them. But as I can relate to the fantasy of becoming a mindless sex slave, I feel quite different about his fate ... :)
7/3/19, 7:47 PM
Oh... Guess I'm still not used to the complete submission kink, that felt extremely sad.
Anonymous
7/3/19, 7:24 PM
Love this little tease for what's to come, I hope the author will come back to this story some day, there's some serious messed up shit in their head that keeps me guessing
Anonymous
7/3/19, 6:55 PM
Can’t tell you how long I’ve wished that we’d see a conclusion to this awesome series. SO good to see you back in the writing scene!
Jun 18, 2019
7/3/19, 6:04 PM
Oh gah, I love this story. So super sexy. It hit soooo many buttons!
7/3/19, 4:38 PM
Heru Kane, I always appreciate your comments on my stories, but when I saw your comments on earlier chapters, I knew you were going to be disappointed by this conclusion. It's just a case where our kinks (and general worldviews) often don't coincide. I would have been equally upset if the story went in some of the directions you were suggesting (e.g. Alvo becomes a powerful Alpha male dominating his tribemates).
7/3/19, 4:23 PM
I had to admit something first which is I’m a longtime fan of your work and this great story is yet another reason why. How such a simple mechanism can so easily change people is simply cum-inducing. I’m also really into the predator becoming the prey from the first part ;D Can’t wait for more from you in the future.
7/3/19, 4:22 PM
They say the sign of great work is when it creates an emotion in the reader - and well, this chapter has filled me with anger. I really can't stand the ending and the nature of things. Is very frustrating and in part annoying. The whole addition of another society just has me rolling my eyes at it. Especially since we saw a person arriving and they seemed normal. So yeah, absolutely not a fan of the direction this story took. By the way there were many ways you could have kept the ending ambiguous. A perfect example is how in the Giver you don't know if the lad survives or what sort of world he has entered. This one is just sad.
Daddy 🍆
7/3/19, 4:17 PM
Please! Make another chapter to this! Don't stop writing!
ForgottenCradle
7/3/19, 4:06 PM
damn! I binged the change and mr.red in 2 days! and I love your universe. the lore.the premise. I can only recommend this to everyone and I hope for much more