Recent Comments

7/4/19, 5:32 AM
Bro, I’ve got no idea where this is goin and I’m so stoked to find out. Loving this series.
Willie Cici
7/4/19, 3:32 AM
First of all, the minute something is posted by Hypnothrill, it's must read. Second, this was a spectacular story. It touched hit all the marks. Kudso to you for your creative talent!!! Keep 'em coming!!!
Anonymous
7/4/19, 1:21 AM
amazing!!!! Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
7/3/19, 11:00 PM
This is so hot! Please make more, I need to see what happens next
Martin
7/3/19, 8:06 PM
For what it's worth, I found the whole story extremely hot. There could have been more sex, but the actual story was great, including the ending. But I agree that the world you've created has so much more potential for stories and backgrounds that it seems a waste to close it up with that surprising and shocking (but still very hot) ending. That people think it's sad is just a testimony how well you managed to describe the characters (Alvo) so people feel with them. But as I can relate to the fantasy of becoming a mindless sex slave, I feel quite different about his fate ... :)
7/3/19, 7:47 PM
Oh... Guess I'm still not used to the complete submission kink, that felt extremely sad.
Anonymous
7/3/19, 7:24 PM
Love this little tease for what's to come, I hope the author will come back to this story some day, there's some serious messed up shit in their head that keeps me guessing
Anonymous
7/3/19, 6:55 PM
Can’t tell you how long I’ve wished that we’d see a conclusion to this awesome series. SO good to see you back in the writing scene!
Jun 18, 2019
7/3/19, 6:04 PM
Oh gah, I love this story. So super sexy. It hit soooo many buttons!
7/3/19, 4:38 PM
Heru Kane, I always appreciate your comments on my stories, but when I saw your comments on earlier chapters, I knew you were going to be disappointed by this conclusion. It's just a case where our kinks (and general worldviews) often don't coincide. I would have been equally upset if the story went in some of the directions you were suggesting (e.g. Alvo becomes a powerful Alpha male dominating his tribemates).