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Jun 29, 2019
7/3/19, 12:42 AM
This is a fetish story website, not a creative writing symposium. Sorry to have wasted 5 minutes of your time reading these. I'll appropriately label these as vignettes in the future to appease the pedants among us. Feel free not to read my material in the future if it doesn't have enough exposition, conflict, resolution, whatever you think is required for a story. The very first tag for the stories is incest. You were warned.
Jun 29, 2019
Anonymous
7/3/19, 12:29 AM
To be truthful, these are not short stories. A short story still needs to have a proper sequence. These are small snippets at best, with no real explanations or build up. While they were "hot" (gross incest implications notwithstanding), they went nowhere.
Jul 1, 2019
tiny tim
7/2/19, 10:54 PM
Prefer stories WITHOUT photograph's...Find it more 'erotic' to visualize the guy's in the stories myself....
Anonymous
7/2/19, 10:49 PM
I really love original so I'm excited of this now
Anonymous
7/2/19, 10:47 PM
Nice set up! Good for Ed! I hope he keeps the head hair.
LongtimeFan
7/2/19, 10:46 PM
Oh, how BEAUTIFULLY terrible. Don't get me wrong--it's written perfectly! You somehow managed to make an *orgy* depressing--do you have any idea how gifted you are, Hypnothrill? The poignancy of Alvo's sadness, and the realization that the others will inevitably forget him...and then that ENDING! A brilliant twist and a fascinating take on "the devil you know." It may be hell being an animal...but surely being a mindless doll is worse. And yet, as you say, Joris and Alvo will never realize that. Chills, my dear Hypnothrill--absolute CHILLS. You are the master!
7/2/19, 10:12 PM
Let's just say that Chapter 2 is going in a bit of a different direction, but yes, everyone will definitely be happy! < demonic laugh > (And it's Evan that's completely inexperienced, not Caden. Caden's a bit of a slut who just isn't terribly good at getting what he wants.)
Lusty Stallion
7/2/19, 9:55 PM
another great work man. thanks
Corinthian
7/2/19, 8:44 PM
@Robinhood70 - thanks for that, much appreciated. I couldn't help noticing that Caden was very clear he wants to have his first relationship with someone who's as inexperienced as himself, which can also be read as someone who's as experienced as he is. So I pose a question: if his experience level is built up to Tom's (very high?) expectations, then perhaps everyone is happy?