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Anonymous
7/2/19, 10:47 PM
Nice set up! Good for Ed! I hope he keeps the head hair.
LongtimeFan
7/2/19, 10:46 PM
Oh, how BEAUTIFULLY terrible. Don't get me wrong--it's written perfectly! You somehow managed to make an *orgy* depressing--do you have any idea how gifted you are, Hypnothrill? The poignancy of Alvo's sadness, and the realization that the others will inevitably forget him...and then that ENDING! A brilliant twist and a fascinating take on "the devil you know." It may be hell being an animal...but surely being a mindless doll is worse. And yet, as you say, Joris and Alvo will never realize that. Chills, my dear Hypnothrill--absolute CHILLS. You are the master!
7/2/19, 10:12 PM
Let's just say that Chapter 2 is going in a bit of a different direction, but yes, everyone will definitely be happy! < demonic laugh > (And it's Evan that's completely inexperienced, not Caden. Caden's a bit of a slut who just isn't terribly good at getting what he wants.)
Lusty Stallion
7/2/19, 9:55 PM
another great work man. thanks
Corinthian
7/2/19, 8:44 PM
@Robinhood70 - thanks for that, much appreciated. I couldn't help noticing that Caden was very clear he wants to have his first relationship with someone who's as inexperienced as himself, which can also be read as someone who's as experienced as he is. So I pose a question: if his experience level is built up to Tom's (very high?) expectations, then perhaps everyone is happy?
7/2/19, 7:51 PM
Hmm, well I can't really say I'm surprised at the choice. That said, I really hoped he would be a Leader. That woud have been hot.
Anonymous
7/2/19, 7:28 PM
Beautiful story with a poignant conclusion. In the end, don't we all have to choose what enslaves us?
perroviejo53@gmail.com
7/2/19, 7:13 PM
LOVE this series! Please continue.
7/2/19, 6:56 PM
@UchihaDEMS: I'm not a fan of every last character in a porn story being attractive or at least being of interest to each other. As strange as that may sound, I think it makes it more realistic. While my own tastes are more like Peter's in Web of Trust (18-30ish is preferred, but older happens on occasion), in Tom's case, I decided to model him after a former roommate who was exclusively interested in younger guys and had no interest in guys his own age or older at all. Having said all that, you *have* given me an idea for Evan, which I think will make for a much more compelling ending to the next chapter. It's not quite what you were talking about, but it's at least somewhat related. So, you can look forward to that. :P @wang: It's mostly already written, though it needs a fair bit of revising. Hopefully, it won't be too long before I publish it, unlike the rather large break between WoT chapters. (It's been a bad year for me so far in the sense that I just haven't had energy or even much libido until just recently.) @Corinthian: *Suggestions* are always welcome, though I make no promises, of course. I only get bitchy about it when people start saying things more like "you're gonna write this, oh and Tom has to do that, and obviously Caden's gonna be bla..." and so on. As noted above, UchihaDEMS has already given me an idea, though it probably wasn't directly his intention to do so. :)
Corinthian
7/2/19, 5:09 PM
Just wondered - do you want any suggestions for the next chapter? Thought I should ask because I wouldn't want to be pushy and just put them out there! :)