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6/30/19, 11:58 PM
Phenomenal as always. Hope it gets a second chapter.
Evan
6/30/19, 11:37 PM
This was really sweet. Nice to see some power being used for good.
6/30/19, 10:59 PM
I like the setup here. I'll definitely be interested to see where you take the series now that you're getting back into it.
Anonymous
6/30/19, 9:08 PM
Whatever happened to the fifth sibling? Will we read all about it in the second chapter?
6/30/19, 8:37 PM
Dammit! Not sure what happened, but I lost the reply I just typed. Bah! Let's try this again.... @Piko: Yes, I've always believed that different subjects have different personalities and psyches, and will therefore respond differently to the same commands, or need slightly different commands to get to the same place. Similarly, different hypnotists might produce different effects, just because of how they think differently from one another. We'll see this in WoT a few chapters from now when one subject helps bring another subject under Peter's control in a way Peter wouldn't have thought of. That convinces Peter that the first subject should actually be a new hypnotist in the web. As for Evan/Kevin, there are certainly some similarities between them. The difference is that Kevin is aware he's having sex, it's just not the primary motivation for him; it's his natural submission that drives him. In Evan's case, he would've been mostly a top, though not at all interested in a Dom/sub role. In his mind, though, he's not having sex at all yet. Not even a little bit! ;)
Great story well done.
6/30/19, 6:57 PM
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Anonymous
6/30/19, 6:48 PM
Clever!!
6/30/19, 4:46 PM
Aww. How sweet. And sexy too. What powerful magic said being, god?, has. Very cool. Glad he used it to help someone. :)
Anonymous
6/30/19, 3:25 PM
Definitely loved the twist at the end with Harry. i would like to see more development and description of what happened with Harry, rather than Rachel's activities. Good work, though!
Anonymous
6/30/19, 2:48 PM
This is really sexy and hot. I'm always glad to see more work from you. I really enjoyed seeing how the different characters are treated and react to the different triggers and instructions and I am conflicted between seeing more of Truth be told and Web of trust. Keep up the good work!