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Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/1/19, 2:01 AM
Should be broken into paragraphs.
Jun 29, 2019
7/1/19, 1:29 AM
I intentionally left it vague in the story, but I thought of it as a curse on the hotel causing the men to fuck.
Anonymous
7/1/19, 12:53 AM
very sweet
wow
7/1/19, 12:06 AM
Hey, that's what I call a transformation
7/1/19, 12:04 AM
Call that artistic freedom :D
6/30/19, 11:58 PM
Phenomenal as always. Hope it gets a second chapter.
Evan
6/30/19, 11:37 PM
This was really sweet. Nice to see some power being used for good.
6/30/19, 10:59 PM
I like the setup here. I'll definitely be interested to see where you take the series now that you're getting back into it.
Anonymous
6/30/19, 9:08 PM
Whatever happened to the fifth sibling? Will we read all about it in the second chapter?
6/30/19, 8:37 PM
Dammit! Not sure what happened, but I lost the reply I just typed. Bah! Let's try this again.... @Piko: Yes, I've always believed that different subjects have different personalities and psyches, and will therefore respond differently to the same commands, or need slightly different commands to get to the same place. Similarly, different hypnotists might produce different effects, just because of how they think differently from one another. We'll see this in WoT a few chapters from now when one subject helps bring another subject under Peter's control in a way Peter wouldn't have thought of. That convinces Peter that the first subject should actually be a new hypnotist in the web. As for Evan/Kevin, there are certainly some similarities between them. The difference is that Kevin is aware he's having sex, it's just not the primary motivation for him; it's his natural submission that drives him. In Evan's case, he would've been mostly a top, though not at all interested in a Dom/sub role. In his mind, though, he's not having sex at all yet. Not even a little bit! ;)