Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/29/19, 11:28 AM
mind blowing story looking forward to next chapters to cumm
6/29/19, 11:17 AM
Nice! One of the things that had been throwing me a bit about this series was the fact that, with Rex acting as "one of the gang," there was no one to really take on the "diabolical mind-controlling villain" role. But in this chapter, Smartiak is taking on that role admirably. I can't wait to see how he actually ends up transforming Magno Boy!
Evan
6/29/19, 11:09 AM
Another fantastic story from you. Loved every second. Such a nice build and gradual change.
Jun 29, 2019
Anonymous
6/29/19, 10:11 AM
Nice story, wish the ending was longer, bit more of a description about him getting into his gear and how his hair etc changed. Maybe another part where he’s with the lads and then he goes back to the flat and finds his clothes have been replaced with trackies
Jun 29, 2019
Anonymous
6/29/19, 9:35 AM
More please,also is there any way to add musk or pheromones to it?
Papa Werebear
6/29/19, 9:09 AM
This is getting good! I'm extremely interested in seeing what happens next! 🐻
Anonymous
6/29/19, 8:47 AM
Was wondering did Rex ever look himself up. He is in his own future so there should be some info about him, And what kind of impact did he have in the past?
Anonymous
6/29/19, 7:22 AM
Disagree with the above comment. Pompadour with ducktail. Less emphasis on tattoos and piercings for focus on leather and style and his coif. Classic 50's thug.
Lusty Stallion
6/29/19, 6:30 AM
Loved it Chris. particularly the back to the future allusions. this story is getting better & better. loved the twunk transformation too. whoever gets transformed, they're gonna need
BO
6/29/19, 6:23 AM
Nicely done. The plot is believable while at the same time magical. I liked enough to give it a second read right away.