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11/14/24, 1:30 AM
Nice to see your work posted here!
Nov 12, 2024
11/14/24, 1:23 AM
That was hot.
The hypnotist
11/13/24, 8:59 PM
Awesome !!! Can't wait to see what will happen

11/13/24, 11:48 PM
@The hypnotist thank you (: The next chapter soon will be released!
11/13/24, 11:22 PM
So we Had an all dick man,all balls man maybe next all ass man?
11/13/24, 10:37 PM
Well, clearly I'm late to the party. Something about that rapidly increasing word count just stressed me out at the time. This is a great multi-session read! I love that I can see the story shifting direction as it increases in scale and the emotions get more real between Sam and Gabe. I'm excited to see the conclusion when you're ready to share it <3 I especially like that we don't know the specific wording of a lot of Gabe's edits. I have many many more thoughts but I am completely and entirely spent after all of that, so you may need to ask me for them another time. Unlike these boys, I don't have any Gaborade keeping me going.
11/13/24, 2:37 PM
I have a hunch that the ending of this story may have branches, one is a good ending and the other is a bad ending.

Zander
11/13/24, 8:11 PM
@[Hybraly](/user/show/10043434) The idea of ​​two endings is very good for such stories. I hope the good ending will be worthy, if there is one at all.
Zander
11/13/24, 8:08 PM
Thanks for the continuation. Honestly, I don't see a good ending for this story, because Brian has no chance to defeat Chester because he has a powerful force behind him. Brian's only chance is a Miracle, if another powerful force helps him. In fact, the force that supports Chester should have an Antipode, as it always is and was in the Multiverse for balance. But since this is your story, I don't see a good ending for Jason and Brian.) But I will follow how this story ends. I really liked the moment with Brian's sleep because it's very intriguing and allows us to reveal the character more. I hope you won't screw this line up) The story also has the potential for spin-offs due to the consequences of Chester's desire for peace).
11/2/24, 12:24 AM
Amazing ending! Love the growing romantic tension between Vince and Ty!

11/13/24, 6:19 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! My goal was to write something that had both romance and squirmy elements.

11/13/24, 7:45 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Excited to see what a part two would offer!
Elm
10/18/24, 2:27 AM
Bad end?? It's perfect 😍 Seriously though, I'm beyond impressed at how well written this story is, thank you for writing it!!

11/13/24, 6:23 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/567745) Thanks for commenting! It's my favorite part of writing.
11/13/24, 6:22 PM
I don't know about getting turned into a himbo, but Remy definitely doesn't win in every branch.