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6/28/19, 5:15 AM
no, you're good 👍 It's more of general annoyance at the flag than thinking you were being racist. plus it makes me feel better to know you thoroughly thought this out and did it with a certain intent in mind. A+ writing (On a separate note, "I'm not racist, i have black friends" doesn't mean you're not racist. i knew a girl who claimed "i can't be racist, one of my boyfriends was black and i lost my virginity to him", which... just no. Not aimed at you, just another pet peeve of mine 😋. Also, i like telling the story 😉)
Jun 20, 2019
ThatOneGuy
6/28/19, 4:13 AM
Definitely one of my new favorite authors!
Anonymous
6/28/19, 4:02 AM
Yesss keep then coming, my dick can't wait ;D
Anonymous
6/28/19, 3:39 AM
First of all, when it comes to Italian red wines, the king is Brunello di Montalcino. The princes are 'Nobile di Montelpulciano', 'Montepulciano d'Abruzzo' (sometimes referred to as "Montepulciano d'Abruzzi'), Barbera d'Alba, and a blend generically referred to as 'Super Tuscan'. Lacrime Christi is red that comes from Campagnia (in the South). It's okay. And, Chianti Classico is the crap wine, the moral equivalent of two-buck chuck. Second, hot, hot story. I'm new to the site. I read all Willie's stories. Loved it.
Love it!
6/28/19, 3:31 AM
great idea and hot description
6/28/19, 3:12 AM
Many times when discussing monogamous vs open relationships, I always make the point that men function best in groups. Stories on this site confirm that many guys also think the same, or at least hope it to be so. Whether in law enforcement, sports, military, males bond best in groups with a clear male hierarchy and an undisturbed male energy. That said, I'm excited to see how you play this out. So far it's in a very interesting realm.
6/28/19, 3:10 AM
Get in Tattcub, the waters fine
Vicbiguy
6/28/19, 1:37 AM
I liked it ! But my WASP blood makes want to tell you that MONTEPULCIANO is a nice Italian red, but great. There are many much better like Lacrima Christi.
Jeep
6/28/19, 12:53 AM
i can understand why you would find the Mississippi state flag to be problematic, but i specifically included the detail for a few reasons. First, I wanted the boys to turn into Southern country archetypes, kind of the epitome of their particular type, and it made sense that one of Beef's first tattoos would be the Stars and Bars or state flag or something similar placed without much thought to it offending anyone (in my imagination its on his pec right over his heart). Remember, these boys grew up playing football in the deep South, so they probably have more black friends than white, and blast both rap and country when they're driving their trucks. Beef would see it as a symbol of home, not a symbol of racial hate... The other reason I went full on Mississippi is that one of the main elements of this story is the dumbing down of the people being changed, so I imagined two farm boys, not smart to begin with, attending a failing rural school in a state which is dead last for education in most polls. Their only way out is their athletic ability, so you have a particular type of anti intellectual, almost a perfect storm of situational and hereditary lack of intelligence. So I guess I could have gone another direction, and may have been a bit lazy in using what i considered a type of shorthand to reinforce type, but it wasnt meant to be offensive. If I offended anyone, I apologize. That being said, thanks for reading, and thanks for the feedback!
Beardfull1
6/28/19, 12:49 AM
Just wait for the next installments... as the series progresses things will get HOT!