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Anonymous
6/27/19, 2:30 PM
totally here for this. thanos should turn tony into a living dildo\sexbot. thor "you should have gone for the head" would also be fun
Bibimbap
6/27/19, 2:22 PM
Please, keep working on this story. The humiliation and debasing of Mike is pure hotness!!!!!
Joseph Vale
6/27/19, 2:13 PM
Love it. Would love if Cody came under Dylan's control!!
6/27/19, 2:09 PM
I've got an idea for the next chapter, where the bros go to the bank and secure ownership of the house from a bored divorced loan officer. I'll try to write it up tonight.
Anonymous
6/27/19, 2:08 PM
God, I love this story. It's great to come back to it after a couple years.
Caedmon's Cock
6/27/19, 1:20 PM
This is an absolutely wonderful chapter! The process of coming to realize that your community is not what you thought it was (though you thought something was awry) is also the moment when you must distance yourself from the relationships you once had; either in the form of ostracization or 'benevolent' leadership. I would seriously buy and read the novelization of this story.
Anonymous
6/27/19, 1:17 PM
nice start , can't wait for more!
6/27/19, 12:52 PM
Wow, thanks for the positive feedback, guys! Heru Kane, all your questions will be answered in the next chapter. LongtimeFan, I never explicitly address this within the story, but I would say that they reduce men to workhorses simply because there's so much hard physical labor that needs to be done to sustain the community. The whole all-male clan system and the having sex with other men is a way to keep the population satisfied while boosting social cohesion; notice how little jealousy or possessiveness or competitiveness we see. And even the loss of memory helps to promote that cohesive identity and positive attitude; it spares them from the feelings of melancholy and loss that Alvo's currently experiencing. The way I imagine it, this system's been going on for generations, and so the current Leaders didn't invent it; they're just the ones who are helping to sustain it (and it's built for maximum sustainability, since it privileges community harmony over individual ambition).
Anonymous
6/27/19, 12:19 PM
More please. :)
transformheaven
6/27/19, 11:51 AM
More more more :3