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Anonymous
6/27/19, 12:19 PM
More please. :)
transformheaven
6/27/19, 11:51 AM
More more more :3
Anonymous
6/27/19, 11:38 AM
Great start, excited to read more!
Anonymous
6/27/19, 11:32 AM
This is a really solid chapter. Keep it up!
LongtimeFan
6/27/19, 11:06 AM
A beautiful chapter! The reveal that this society isn't some far-flung future, but one existing alongside a world like our own, gives the story even greater power. The Leaders being generally decent men who genuinely believe that things like independent thought and personal freedom lead to distress is a nice twist, too--most cult stories frame the ruler as megalomaniacal monsters out to destroy free will for evil. I'm also curious as to WHY the leaders do this...what's the point of the society? Why reduce men to workhorses with the memories of goldfish and the desire to have sex with other men? What goal could that achieve? And now that Alvo has seen the light, can he go back to the cave? Only you could write a story that provokes the mind AND body this well, Hypnothrill. Phenomenal--just phenomenal. :)
Anonymous
6/27/19, 9:38 AM
Awesome story! I think it would also be good to read from an outsider's perspective, who just witnessed Chad's changes.
Anonymous
6/27/19, 7:59 AM
Excellent work
degoetz@yahoo.com
6/27/19, 7:49 AM
Fucking hot! How about an extremely hairy bear bro
6/27/19, 5:13 AM
NICE!!! What an awesome reveal. Very cool. Very sexy. Sooo, I'm curious, does this mean Leaders don't have sex? Or is ot that can have sex its just has to be spread out between all tribes rather then just one. I hope its the second. I wonder what he will choose. Will he stay or will he go. I hope he stays and as a Leader gets to have sex with the followers. Good story. Nice reveal. Very sexy.
Abdamelek
6/27/19, 12:59 AM
We will not stop. There is much work to be done. Hail Pharaoh!