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Lusty stallion
6/21/19, 10:30 PM
lovin
Anonymous
6/21/19, 9:59 PM
love it! more!!!!
Anonymous
6/21/19, 9:13 PM
Phenomenal More please
Stephen
6/21/19, 7:44 PM
Great start mate. Love this type of story. Thanks for writing. :-D
Anonymous
6/21/19, 6:57 PM
I'm hoping for in incoming role reversal. It would be fun to see Tomas take control of Wes.
LongtimeFan
6/21/19, 6:10 PM
Brilliant idea, Hypnothrill! The descriptions of the society, the gorgeous men, and the mass hypnosis are top notch. And I do enjoy the philosophical implications of not just this story, but your work in general. An episode of *Doctor Who* summed it up best for me: "Is a man who doesn't know he's a slave still a slave?" I mean, on the one hand, these men are obviously brainwashed out of their minds, but on the other, they're genuinely happy with the way things are and have forgotten that things *could* be another way..I love a story that leaves me thinking after I'm done stroking. ;p Amazing work!
6/21/19, 5:48 PM
This feels like the beginning of a new genre: "gay erotic dystopian fiction." I'm so on board for this.
6/21/19, 5:47 PM
Hmm. Interesting. Very interesting. I look forward to reading the rest. I really like the general way the males look at each other's butts. So cool. I am a bit worried about the disappearance. But thats quite common in such genre. I do have to add it would be nofty to follow a person who becomes say recognized as an alpha leader by the testing. Thwt might be fun.
stevenkeech@att.net
6/21/19, 4:42 PM
Great story, can't wait for more
Anonymous
6/21/19, 4:23 PM
Having read the original story, I'm really looking forward to seeing how you will handle things! Excellent start, you've created quite the paradise ;)