Recent Comments

6/21/19, 5:47 PM
Hmm. Interesting. Very interesting. I look forward to reading the rest. I really like the general way the males look at each other's butts. So cool. I am a bit worried about the disappearance. But thats quite common in such genre. I do have to add it would be nofty to follow a person who becomes say recognized as an alpha leader by the testing. Thwt might be fun.
stevenkeech@att.net
6/21/19, 4:42 PM
Great story, can't wait for more
Anonymous
6/21/19, 4:23 PM
Having read the original story, I'm really looking forward to seeing how you will handle things! Excellent start, you've created quite the paradise ;)
6/21/19, 3:07 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Tom! This is just the first 1/3, so there's a lot more of the story to come.
Anonymous
6/21/19, 3:00 PM
great job....would love to read more!!
Anonymous
6/21/19, 2:40 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
6/21/19, 2:29 PM
Continuous, please. It's a good story!
Jun 20, 2019
Mr.T
6/21/19, 2:26 PM
Good story, please keep going!!!
Jun 20, 2019
thewizardofwhite@gmail.com
6/21/19, 2:18 PM
I loved the use of pictures it worked well with the story
6/21/19, 1:46 PM
Absolutely fantastic! The attention to world-building and relationships was extremely rewarding, and the hypnotic descriptions were very captivating. Brilliant work deserving a sequel, if you have the time or interest.