Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/21/19, 3:00 PM
great job....would love to read more!!
Anonymous
6/21/19, 2:40 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
6/21/19, 2:29 PM
Continuous, please. It's a good story!
Jun 20, 2019
Mr.T
6/21/19, 2:26 PM
Good story, please keep going!!!
Jun 20, 2019
thewizardofwhite@gmail.com
6/21/19, 2:18 PM
I loved the use of pictures it worked well with the story
6/21/19, 1:46 PM
Absolutely fantastic! The attention to world-building and relationships was extremely rewarding, and the hypnotic descriptions were very captivating. Brilliant work deserving a sequel, if you have the time or interest.
Anonymous
6/21/19, 12:12 PM
I love this! Please make more. I can't wait to see what happens next
leatherboy.f
6/21/19, 9:00 AM
really good story! hope to read more soon
6/21/19, 8:41 AM
Not a fan of scally lads. Inconsistency errors too. But I just switched the stereotype to jocks so it doesn't matter.
Clevis83
6/21/19, 8:00 AM
I liked it, very exciting and I hope there are other chapters! The only question is: why keep the two boys in turns frozen, if they are obliged to obey every Wes command? I would have preferred to leave them free to have fun with each other, under the control of Wes