Recent Comments

6/20/19, 10:25 PM
I miss some transformation and mind change stuff...
6/20/19, 9:18 PM
Cool story. is he done transforming or is he good as is? Just thought he's make a great gay daddy bear!
Jun 18, 2019
6/20/19, 8:39 PM
Wow! Well done. I love that Mr Masters is not really the focus, and is mostly off screen. You never find out exactly what he whispers to them, but it doesn’t matter. I loved the one night of resistance too, where Gerry knows something is gone wrong and he should get out of there.
Sleepycub88
6/20/19, 8:01 PM
amazing story, very well written and the idea was super hot! keep them coming ;-)
Anonymous
6/20/19, 7:07 PM
really good read.
Anonymous
6/20/19, 7:06 PM
love the shrinking cock and choice to become a girl
Jun 20, 2019
Kevin
6/20/19, 5:17 PM
good story
huck
6/20/19, 3:26 PM
Can hardly wait for the next instalment.
Drockan
6/20/19, 1:19 PM
After reading this one I looked up the whole set on the MC Story Archive. Some of them are good, some are great, a couple are ok, but all except this one feel a little too short. Of the stories involving both mental and physical changes, this is the only one where I think the mental changes were more exciting, mostly because the dog transformation didn't lead to any additional action and, with what appears to be personality death, doesn't really fit the theme of the characters learning a lesson through overexposure to their sin. That being said, I really enjoyed what happened to Lance's parents and sister, and I'd love to follow them and the rest of their family. Especially his dad, whose butt was described as being really attractive but never received any other attention.
6/20/19, 11:48 AM
Please do continue this!