Recent Comments

6/21/19, 8:41 AM
Not a fan of scally lads. Inconsistency errors too. But I just switched the stereotype to jocks so it doesn't matter.
Clevis83
6/21/19, 8:00 AM
I liked it, very exciting and I hope there are other chapters! The only question is: why keep the two boys in turns frozen, if they are obliged to obey every Wes command? I would have preferred to leave them free to have fun with each other, under the control of Wes
Z-dog
6/21/19, 6:36 AM
Great start......looking forward the next 3 days.
UchihaDEMS
6/21/19, 6:19 AM
I always love your story. This is so hot <3
UchihaDEMS
6/21/19, 4:54 AM
Big men under control, thats would be nice! Gym it is <3
6/21/19, 3:46 AM
LOVE your descriptive and inventive stories.
6/21/19, 3:44 AM
great idea and a nice start for you. KEEP writting please.
Anonymous
6/21/19, 3:41 AM
If only . . . Loved the story!
Anonymous
6/21/19, 2:54 AM
really enjoying this , kinda wish i were alex
Anonymous
6/21/19, 2:02 AM
Was an alright story. Few spelling mistakes or inconsistencies but you can guess what you were meaning. “WHAT WOULD CHANGE YOU LIFE?” Only comment i would make is like.... Keep how the changes happen a bit more consistent. At the start it was a seemingly magical app, and fighting these changes just made it worse (shaving), then it changed to anything someone said became true, but seemed in on it the entire time. Might just be me, but this just didn't flow. Was going one direction then just did a 180.