Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/19/19, 4:14 AM
I liked your concept a lot. Cant wait for a longer more detailed story with the same type of induction.
6/19/19, 4:09 AM
Agreed. While it's got some interesting concepts, and...frankly...the potential for truly hot narrative...the story could use some visceral aspects to its development.
6/19/19, 2:25 AM
Hunter - tomorrow afternoon, Albuquerque to Dallas. As to the comment about more details about the induction, I agree and I will work on that in the future. Thank you for the comments!
Jun 18, 2019
Cigarjock18
6/19/19, 12:47 AM
What a great story. This is one you need to continue. Too bad there wasn't a band called The Maduro,Boys. A group of fresh faced lads that Mr Masters remakes into a band of inked pierced big maduro smoking punk pigs
6/18/19, 11:50 PM
So happy to hear there's going to be more. It's a great start.
6/18/19, 11:45 PM
Thanks so much for all your positive comments, guys! I'm glad to know there's an audience for my particular brand of ero hypno. I'm planning to write more of this story soon.
Jun 18, 2019
6/18/19, 10:58 PM
This is pretty hot. I love how the hypnosis works, both subliminal and then more openly. I love how Mr Masters (great name, nobody wpuld think twoce on him being called Master, lol) switched things up. The pup one and the jockstrap are particularly hot. What acool setup! are p
Anonymous
6/18/19, 10:14 PM
A fun concept, but I’d have loved to have seen detail as to just how Brandon got taken down into trance and subsequently reprogrammed rather than just getting a “30 minutes later...”
Slave Abdamelek
6/18/19, 9:50 PM
Thank you all very much for the feedback. And keep in mind that we are going for the weak-minded first so the hive mind can be powerful enough to face the stronger ones? There will definitely be more struggle ahead from the victims.
6/18/19, 9:06 PM
This story was really good. I really enjoyed how you kept refering to Danny as an ape, I really like devolution stories. Keep up the good work.