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leatherboy.f
6/18/19, 8:29 PM
thnx for the advice, i corrected a few things, i hope its better now.
Jun 18, 2019
Anonymous
6/18/19, 8:01 PM
I'm so hard; every beat was perfect. The jockstraps; sending them to sleep; all of
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
6/18/19, 7:40 PM
When are you flying again dude?
Anonymous
6/18/19, 5:19 PM
thanks for writing this! it's one of the best 'big sub small top' stories i've read on this site. your writing styles are very creative and they are definitely a pleasure to read and enjoy. thanks! i'm looking forward for more =)
Anonymous
6/18/19, 5:08 PM
Terrific
6/18/19, 4:38 PM
Great story! I hope there is much more to come!
6/18/19, 4:36 PM
@Tommi95 — I see your point, and it's definitely a valid one. But the dumbing down aspect is specifically what makes it fun for me. :P.
Tommi95
6/18/19, 4:09 PM
When I am jerking off this story is great, after I have come I feel terrible. I mean Jackey is no longer a human being. He is just an obedient dog unable to ask himself questions. It's not a life. The only thing he can feel is "I want my daddy do protect me, so I'll do whatever he tells me", "I just wanna suck his cock and drink his piss". But where is his humanity? I mean when you say "his mind gone, no traces of Daniel" it makes me feel as though this teen has been murdered and reduced to a comatose, complying state. This means of course that Daddy is a monster that does not care about Danny in the least, since he has destroyed his personality just to get a fuck toy. I get it's just an erotic story but it would be nice to see a person that willingly embraces his submissive side and finds a Master that does not consider him an inferior being at all, but simply a lover who has a submissive side. But the love, the mutual respect and the consentment should be there. And it would be nice to see the sub actually succeeding in his life and fulfilling all his ambitions. At least that's how I see a healthy bdsm relationship. This one is hot while jerking off but if I actually think about it, it's a series of crimes against human rights that has nothing to do with love.
Anonymous
6/18/19, 4:02 PM
The story could of ending with the new Mal realizing what had happened to him. The new George laughing it off. Then the new Mal arriving at court for his hearing and seeing the new George's behavior, like his old self. Then the new Ma having to do jail time. A twist of fate.
Tommi95
6/18/19, 3:53 PM
Yeah I am with David on this. I mean it's cool to see him become a submissive but I don't get why he has to lose his mental abilities. I get when it's a temporary thing during sex, but I don't get why it has to permanent. Doesn't Daddy love Daniel? Wouldn't he want him to be able to interact with him like a lover? Besides to me compromising a person's mental capabilities and personality is pretty much like murder. On one side I find it hot because Danny has no control, on the other side I just feel too bad for him.