Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/19, 11:53 AM
amazing start
Jun 18, 2019
LongtimeFan
6/18/19, 10:08 AM
Hypnothrill, you have YET AGAIN knocked it out of the park! I don't know how, but you have the secret--something about your writing, and the way you depict transformations, hits every one of my spots. I like how you branched out a bit and hinted at other fetishes, too, while never taking away from that ever-pleasant image of throngs of gorgeous young guys, half-lidded and sleepy, losing themselves. A gold record! ;p
Anonymous
6/18/19, 9:10 AM
Great!! Looking forward to seeing what you do with T'Challa.
Tommi95
6/18/19, 8:20 AM
Very nice. However don't make Sammy stupid please. I want him to feel emotions and to be able of reasoning, I don't want him to become a puppet. And I believe Doctor does not want it either, since he stated he loves him. I got kinda worried about the "dash of simplified thinking". However it seems like Sammy is still able to feel love, loneliness, sadness, jealousy, lust and so on. So I am glad he is still a complete human being.
6/18/19, 6:40 AM
Not quite enough mental transformation for my tastes, I'm afraid. And just a piece of advice: take the time to spellcheck and proofread your stories before posting. It will make a big difference to your readers.
Anonymous
6/18/19, 5:30 AM
enjoy this a lot would like to see more from the stones, like make steves spirit/soul more powerful so people follow him even more, power stone for electricity stuff, space stone for exhibitionism/Temperature events, time keeping someone trapped in an orgaisum or removing scars, combine time/mind/reality to make peter physically and mentally an adult, use power to merge bucky's arm with his body and make it even stronger
Anonymous
6/18/19, 3:38 AM
A very good story, but the spelling and grammar errors are distracting. I will note that this is your first story here, it's a good effort! Just take a bit more time with editing and proofreading, or ask a friend or someone here to help.
6/18/19, 3:22 AM
Great Story!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:22 AM
Dark, yes. Original, yes. Worth continuing? YES!!!!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:21 AM
I agree. Loved it!!!!