Recent Comments

Tommi95
6/18/19, 3:53 PM
Yeah I am with David on this. I mean it's cool to see him become a submissive but I don't get why he has to lose his mental abilities. I get when it's a temporary thing during sex, but I don't get why it has to permanent. Doesn't Daddy love Daniel? Wouldn't he want him to be able to interact with him like a lover? Besides to me compromising a person's mental capabilities and personality is pretty much like murder. On one side I find it hot because Danny has no control, on the other side I just feel too bad for him.
Anonymous
6/18/19, 3:30 PM
If your intent is to write an introductory story, this is an excellent start. Now you can add the why, Who sent it, What he can do with it and so on but agreed; TO instead of TOO, HEARDED instead of HEARD are all distractions you don't need. Martin can guide you to spell check. My own stories lack in the same area and this is the same feedback I received so it's not exclusive to you. I hope there's a second and third.
Bibimbap
6/18/19, 2:46 PM
What a story! I like it, the debasing and dumbing down are very hot and well written (although I must say I feel bad for poor Mikey). I hope you post chapter 2 soon!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 1:51 PM
GREAT START! You're a creative writer, hope the story continues.
Tommi95
6/18/19, 12:28 PM
Nice story, I actually really enjoyed it. I just don't get why every sissy has to become shallow and dull. This man was actually a clever man, why does he have to lose his capabilities in maths etc etc? I mean a guy can be a Nobel Prize winner and still enjoy being a sissy slut, the 2 things are not mutually exclusive.
Anonymous
6/18/19, 11:53 AM
amazing start
Jun 18, 2019
LongtimeFan
6/18/19, 10:08 AM
Hypnothrill, you have YET AGAIN knocked it out of the park! I don't know how, but you have the secret--something about your writing, and the way you depict transformations, hits every one of my spots. I like how you branched out a bit and hinted at other fetishes, too, while never taking away from that ever-pleasant image of throngs of gorgeous young guys, half-lidded and sleepy, losing themselves. A gold record! ;p
Anonymous
6/18/19, 9:10 AM
Great!! Looking forward to seeing what you do with T'Challa.
Tommi95
6/18/19, 8:20 AM
Very nice. However don't make Sammy stupid please. I want him to feel emotions and to be able of reasoning, I don't want him to become a puppet. And I believe Doctor does not want it either, since he stated he loves him. I got kinda worried about the "dash of simplified thinking". However it seems like Sammy is still able to feel love, loneliness, sadness, jealousy, lust and so on. So I am glad he is still a complete human being.
6/18/19, 6:40 AM
Not quite enough mental transformation for my tastes, I'm afraid. And just a piece of advice: take the time to spellcheck and proofread your stories before posting. It will make a big difference to your readers.