Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:20 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:20 AM
Another WC classic. Keep on writing!!!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:10 AM
Please more of this! Love me some stupid, stinky jocks!
anysexgay@gmail.com
6/18/19, 1:35 AM
Excelente relato tratare de aplicar algo parecido con un amigo, soy hijo unico, si se da te cuento...
Bibimbap
6/18/19, 1:27 AM
And I'm more than ready for the next chapter! the dumbing down process is great and the humiliation really hot, I like the plot and the characters, but I've also enjoyed with your writing style. For example, the "reptilian stillness" make me realize that you're really going beyond of just write a hot story, and I really like that. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 1:24 AM
more please i loved it
Anonymous
6/18/19, 1:23 AM
well... you spelled "waste" correctly. I'm assuming English is a second language. It's a very good story and a good (and well proven) fetish but the spelling and grammar are very distracting. you could add another 10% to the enjoyment if the reader didn't have to guess or auto-correct for you. Otherwise a good story and a happy ending we would all want! if your computer doesn't offer spell check may I suggest you get one of the existing authors to help you format it so the story stands out and not the errors?
UchihaDEMS
6/18/19, 12:58 AM
Love it! So awesome. I'm thankful for the feet part <3 I would love to see his friends to fall too or even Denny's father. Well done.
6/18/19, 12:40 AM
"You're one of us now" Loved it. Slow transformations can bore me, but yours was excellent. And perfect how he went from passionately wanting to find out what's going on, to remembering something and still caring, to remembering something and not caring, and then to remembering nothing. And thanks for leaving Hierarch and the papers unexplained. It adds mystery to the story which already has a nice mystery theme. And so much potential to develop on instead of blowing the wad in one story. Interesting to think if the men in Sherwood are affiliated with the company or victims like Jet.
Ruanraykung@me.com
6/17/19, 11:51 PM
thanks a lot