Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/19, 3:38 AM
A very good story, but the spelling and grammar errors are distracting. I will note that this is your first story here, it's a good effort! Just take a bit more time with editing and proofreading, or ask a friend or someone here to help.
6/18/19, 3:22 AM
Great Story!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:22 AM
Dark, yes. Original, yes. Worth continuing? YES!!!!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:21 AM
I agree. Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:20 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:20 AM
Another WC classic. Keep on writing!!!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 2:10 AM
Please more of this! Love me some stupid, stinky jocks!
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6/18/19, 1:35 AM
Excelente relato tratare de aplicar algo parecido con un amigo, soy hijo unico, si se da te cuento...
Bibimbap
6/18/19, 1:27 AM
And I'm more than ready for the next chapter! the dumbing down process is great and the humiliation really hot, I like the plot and the characters, but I've also enjoyed with your writing style. For example, the "reptilian stillness" make me realize that you're really going beyond of just write a hot story, and I really like that. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Anonymous
6/18/19, 1:24 AM
more please i loved it