Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/18/19, 1:24 AM
more please i loved it
Anonymous
6/18/19, 1:23 AM
well... you spelled "waste" correctly. I'm assuming English is a second language. It's a very good story and a good (and well proven) fetish but the spelling and grammar are very distracting. you could add another 10% to the enjoyment if the reader didn't have to guess or auto-correct for you. Otherwise a good story and a happy ending we would all want! if your computer doesn't offer spell check may I suggest you get one of the existing authors to help you format it so the story stands out and not the errors?
UchihaDEMS
6/18/19, 12:58 AM
Love it! So awesome. I'm thankful for the feet part <3 I would love to see his friends to fall too or even Denny's father. Well done.
6/18/19, 12:40 AM
"You're one of us now" Loved it. Slow transformations can bore me, but yours was excellent. And perfect how he went from passionately wanting to find out what's going on, to remembering something and still caring, to remembering something and not caring, and then to remembering nothing. And thanks for leaving Hierarch and the papers unexplained. It adds mystery to the story which already has a nice mystery theme. And so much potential to develop on instead of blowing the wad in one story. Interesting to think if the men in Sherwood are affiliated with the company or victims like Jet.
Ruanraykung@me.com
6/17/19, 11:51 PM
thanks a lot
Anonymous
6/17/19, 10:17 PM
woww more please!
Lustystallion
6/17/19, 9:46 PM
wow! what a story man. thanks for sharing this great well written hot piece of work. you really have a talent
Anonymous
6/17/19, 9:18 PM
amazing story 10/10
malik
6/17/19, 8:16 PM
great addition, loved every bit of it! looking forward to the next installment.
Anonymous
6/17/19, 8:00 PM
I like the concept but could do without the muscle growth. these characters are sexy enough.