Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/17/19, 11:13 AM
I nutted too, hot story.
Martin
6/17/19, 8:33 AM
Intense... and weird. Curious where this is leading to...
Martin
6/17/19, 8:27 AM
Finally got aroubd to read this, and I really like where this is going. Very hot!
6/17/19, 6:48 AM
This is well-written, dark and very promising. The viewpoint is original. Please continue this.
Angell Kitty
6/17/19, 6:27 AM
Me alegra encontrar una historia en español. Buen trabajo
Aura
6/17/19, 6:19 AM
Oh please, god, we don't have enough Greaser transformations. Give me this oneee thing.
LongtimeFan
6/17/19, 6:19 AM
Phenomenal story! Like Hypnothrill and Willie Cici said, I love the "slow burn" and gradual transformation. Plus you do a great job of depicting the mental transformation by playing with the fourth wall--it's painfully obvious to the READERS that there's something in the water (and likely the coffee too!), but Jet gradually losing that awareness perfectly reflects his mind being drained. Plus your description of the commune and its men...mmmmmm. ;p Fantastic stuff!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:41 AM
Okay, i guess im just a shallow person, but it wasnt the dark tone that bugged me. What disappointed me is the lack of male sex in this chapter. I wish we got to actually see the sex between the coach snd Hal instead of just hearing it. Other than that though, i do like the whole hopelessness of the athletes and being able to see in to their psyche, how broken they are and how the mastr's programming is even messing with their heads. I just wish it was paired with hot, steamy sex too. Thats just my opinion though
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:33 AM
Man! I just found you! I loved this. I can't wait to see more of it. I definitely want to see more of the gypsy one! You're awesome!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:31 AM
I love your stories. I can't wait for the next one