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LongtimeFan
6/17/19, 6:19 AM
Phenomenal story! Like Hypnothrill and Willie Cici said, I love the "slow burn" and gradual transformation. Plus you do a great job of depicting the mental transformation by playing with the fourth wall--it's painfully obvious to the READERS that there's something in the water (and likely the coffee too!), but Jet gradually losing that awareness perfectly reflects his mind being drained. Plus your description of the commune and its men...mmmmmm. ;p Fantastic stuff!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:41 AM
Okay, i guess im just a shallow person, but it wasnt the dark tone that bugged me. What disappointed me is the lack of male sex in this chapter. I wish we got to actually see the sex between the coach snd Hal instead of just hearing it. Other than that though, i do like the whole hopelessness of the athletes and being able to see in to their psyche, how broken they are and how the mastr's programming is even messing with their heads. I just wish it was paired with hot, steamy sex too. Thats just my opinion though
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:33 AM
Man! I just found you! I loved this. I can't wait to see more of it. I definitely want to see more of the gypsy one! You're awesome!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:31 AM
I love your stories. I can't wait for the next one
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:03 AM
Reminds me of Plato lol. It's annoying the first common thing people associate with Plato is his lusty Symposium fanfic, rather than his pretentious advocacy for a society resembling a caste system/proto feudalism lead by enlightened despots and his romanticized depiction prior philosophers.
Chyro
6/17/19, 4:48 AM
Hey there pup echo. Cool to see I can find your stories here now, used to follow you on tumblr. Keep it up with your kinky goodness ^^
Elm
6/17/19, 2:46 AM
I like this story more and more... its refreshing to see the darker side of this site often silly stories. It makes them more real in a way. Thanks again for posting!
6/17/19, 2:14 AM
Aw shucks. You guys are making me blush. I definitely might write a sequel to this one given the interest. :D.
Anonymous
6/17/19, 2:01 AM
love feminization!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 1:53 AM
Smoking hot!!! Subtle transformation always a turn on for me.