Recent Comments

screamingmoist
6/16/19, 3:39 PM
Thanks, even though this is just a teaser wanted to make sure there was enough to still be worth people's time.
Kurby.smith@dbwsys.mb.ca
6/16/19, 12:55 PM
great fuckin story
Kent
6/16/19, 12:45 PM
I really liked it until he started turning into a dog...the mental transformation is great but then randomly at the end turning into a dog brought me out of it. I understand that its the series plot but i feel it could do good without
SirD
6/16/19, 12:19 PM
amazing story... hope there will be a chapter 2
Anonymous
6/16/19, 11:19 AM
This is a nice look at how the rest of the League reacts to their improved leadership. I look forward to seeing how Rex continues his story. I loved the one liner about gravity boy's one liners. Hopefully you overcome the writer's block.
Anonymous
6/16/19, 11:04 AM
Thor please !! :)
Jake
6/16/19, 11:02 AM
I enjoyed this story including the turning the kid to a dog.
Anonymous
6/16/19, 9:27 AM
Just find you came back. I love your story's detailed plausible hypnosis.
Anonymous
6/16/19, 9:17 AM
Excellent work
6/16/19, 9:01 AM
too labelly and easy. no participation and feels we've lost the folks. am curious about alpha bears fantasy come to