Recent Comments

Slab
6/13/19, 8:21 PM
> Hypnothrill 5/31/19 3:23 PM Good story, but it needs a bit more editing, as you call Randy “Nicky” at several points. Yeah, good story, but there are indeed messups, it also was a bit confusing at times in general
6/13/19, 7:04 PM
This is really good, I really enjoyed it. Especially the dumbing down and becoming more animal like.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 6:30 PM
This is so fucking hot, I love it so much, please don't stop
Angell Kitty
6/13/19, 6:11 PM
I'm sorry, I'll try to be more careful.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 1:37 PM
I wish he could have survived. Maybe transforming inside the suit to not need to breathe or eat. Like a boot drone or something. But, other than the death at the end, it was pretty hot.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 1:12 PM
please make a part 4 i need to watch the news
Kevin
6/13/19, 11:28 AM
great story
6/13/19, 10:32 AM
Try better next time.
Ade
6/13/19, 10:28 AM
The story is quite nice and most errors in your english dont feel intrusive. However you referred to the rival president as her, which was intrusive. 7/10
Perfect
6/13/19, 8:22 AM
i cannot wait to see the army and how the seed is spread. very good