Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/13/19, 4:07 AM
If you are still writing this story, I think it reads okay, but Alex is one MOFO who does need to learn a lesson in submission. Rob from your other story "I love him but..." was a better lead character, who while perverse and evil, he was clearly "good" in that he only sought what made him happiest, like Ryan or teaching homophobe Paul a lesson. Alex started this story as a narcissist, he loves himself far too much to love anyone else. That is the weakness in the Re-Educator versus the Megawave as a mind control device, the Re-educator can reshape perceptions and "control conscious mind, the "Megawave" can rewrite the emotions and attitudes along with controlling actions. I'd love to see Alex fail against Rob, who in turn changes Alex to something...far more inverted, perhaps a Beta bitch boi or have Jake become his gay nerd bully, who have learned a few irreversible "lessons" from this experience along with his family. If you want assistance with a conclusion, I'd love to give your story a proper end, where everyone has a "satisfying sexy" conclusion.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 4:02 AM
i don't find the formula repetitive at all. you must have put a lot of effort into making the lyrics rhyme. Very hot and
6/13/19, 3:53 AM
How does one peruse the stories posted and not click on "Enchanted Ass Forest"? Great title. It wasn't what I expected. But I loved it. Great creative idea and very hot to read.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 3:24 AM
Concept is original. I loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/13/19, 2:18 AM
I loved it
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
6/13/19, 1:04 AM
You still on telegram?
6/12/19, 11:58 PM
Oh, and by the way...my favorite song is Terms of Service
6/12/19, 11:52 PM
This was soooo well-constructed and...frankly...hotter than Hell! I found myself utterly swept away by the narrative. If you have any more in you at all,I'll, as the Mindvoiderz sing. be back!!!
Slave Abdamelek
6/12/19, 8:10 PM
Thank you very much! Feedback is much appreciated. I am working on it.
Anonymous
6/12/19, 7:37 PM
That was interesting and sweet. I love it. Also to the anon before me, no way is Master gonna sell Gruff, he's too possessive of his former bully. But yeah as much as it saddens me I can see Master selling Sam away