Recent Comments

6/12/19, 12:51 AM
If the sons are now both gay I don't see how the farm will be passed down to 'future generations'. There won't be any.
6/12/19, 12:48 AM
Nice concept. Great story.
Nov 2, 2008
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6/12/19, 12:08 AM
This is amazingly sexual and passionate. Can we have a sequel?
Mindslavedarius@gmail.com
6/11/19, 11:53 PM
Thank you all for reading it, this series is very personal to me. Hail Amon-Reseph.
david
6/11/19, 11:48 PM
i don't really relate directly to an arrogant muscle stud cop. That's just not me, or anyone i'm likely to have much interest in. However, the process of using voodoo mind control to seduce and transform him to a submissive cock-sucking cracker is exactly my kind of kinky erotic interest. i would love to experience that kind of loss of control to a sexy man like Raf, but likely wouldn't be much fun for Raf as i would probably beg to suck his cock without his using any mind control. i'm not much of a writer myself, but thought your use of narration from alternating perspectives worked really well to introduce the characters and move the plot along. Thanks so much for sharing your imagination and writing skills. i love this story!
Anonymous
6/11/19, 11:47 PM
Loving it so far! Please include more foot fetish. I can't wait to see what other sexy men the Pharaoh will enslave!
nycboot
6/11/19, 10:56 PM
Nice start!
Caboose
6/11/19, 10:30 PM
This story is fantastic. I love the different class of jocks, and can't wait to see the normal jock boys struggle against the pheramones and conditioning of their coaches.
revertra
6/11/19, 9:13 PM
weeeeeeeeeeell that's pretty damn hot!
Anonymous
6/11/19, 9:11 PM
Great great job super hot. However please becareful when you use pictures to show your characters, because if it doesn't match how you described them it will be confusing and take the reader away from your story. As in the case of those boys where neither of them were Ginger in your picture.