Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/11/19, 3:15 PM
You people who have invested yourselves to these characters -- like me. You know what's going to happen? Master is going to sell Gruff and Sam to some asshole, because Gruff's compassion is going to get in the way of Master's profits. I hope not, but I can see it.
Mutabear
6/11/19, 2:51 PM
I loved it! I am really looking forward to scenes if sweaty jocks getting rimmed. There are never enough quality rimming scenes on here.
Anonymous
6/11/19, 1:57 PM
yeah a sequel would be good with the thief having new
Pup Don
6/11/19, 1:38 PM
Thanks for the compliments, guys! There will be more. And Rabbit's just getting started. Benji's gonna soon have some friends.
Anonymous
6/11/19, 1:11 PM
Great story! Well-written!
Anonymous
6/11/19, 1:01 PM
Really great story! I would even like to read an extended version with a bit more character build up. I know you've gotta grab readers' attention pretty quickly, and I think the pacing is really good. As a personal preference, I'd like to see the twins show their true character a little bit before their "punishment" but that's just me ;-) Excellent story again, kept me hard the whole time.
Nov 16, 2005
6/11/19, 11:40 AM
Always loved this story, keep coming back to re-read it! Would love some more work from you if you're still writing.
6/11/19, 11:23 AM
I agree that Zak needs to be taught a lesson of who was in charge there. But leaving someone on the verge of being a potato and losing every turn is disheartening. I'd like to give him a fighting chance to gain his smarts again. No one deserves a complete personality murder.
Anonymous
6/11/19, 9:40 AM
Gruff and Sam sound nice
Anonymous
6/11/19, 8:05 AM
One of my new favs! Hit a lot of buttons. Keep it up dude!