Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/9/19, 5:48 PM
can't wait to see where this goes.
Anonymous
6/9/19, 4:43 PM
Fantastic story! I love the conflicted, confusing feelings that Sean experiences in this. Please consider writing a chapter 2. I really like the wedding and closet case ideas above.
Anonymous
6/9/19, 2:23 PM
love this second part would love to see many more chapters.
Anonymous
6/9/19, 12:56 PM
Second reading was even better than the first. What a well crafted piece of writing!
Jason
6/9/19, 12:45 PM
I am sorry, but this was not a good story st all, IMHO. Ive never enjoyed kidnapping scenes or forced behavior scenes.
Anonymous
6/9/19, 12:38 PM
I kinda want Katie to expose him. That'd be really cool. You never see the bad guys lose here.
Nov 26, 2007
Anonymous
6/9/19, 11:43 AM
I just love this story, hope you can someday give it a continuation
Anonymous
6/9/19, 10:20 AM
Poor Katie :( I feel bad for her
6/9/19, 4:52 AM
Okay, so, MaxOutMale is a story a lot of cats seem hella pumped for, yeah? And I've got the link open in my browser so I'm like, yeah, man, I'll review it or something. But I dunno, dude. I didn't actually read this or anything cause I checked out after it turned out boardin wasn't the central focus. You'll never catch me tripping when it comes to boardin and shit, I mean if you give me a time of day and a place, I'm probably there, busting some tricks up in that bitch like a total, and I quote, bitch-ass-motherfucker. Kevin* didn't believe me 'cause he's a lil douche and all but I said "nah that's cool dude, you're entitled to your opinion and I respect that" only I didn't say that 'cause I don't think I mentioned this yet but he's a lil douche, and lil douches get smacked. That said, I wasn't about to let him totally cramp my style like that so I had him name a time and a place and you'd better believe I busted tricks up in that bitch like a total, and I quote, bitch-ass-motherfucker. Anyway that's the story of why I'm never being invited to a family funeral again but lemme just say, great story broseph, especially the part about the skate shop. Uncle Lorenzo totally had one of those too, may he RIP. Well I mean its probably hard to RIP after your corpse has totally been decapitated by a skateboard but y'know *a lil douche
Felix
6/9/19, 4:26 AM
very interesting man, excellent job, nothing more to say, I'm just think, that think the girls about the change in the boys