Recent Comments

May 24, 2019
The Grand Observer
6/3/19, 7:39 AM
This Story has great potential but it is to rushed to much so to be overlooked. it is most notable when the names get mixed during the transformation sequence. I would like to have read more about James as well as Karl to establish a better relationship so the end has a better pay off , even if it means doing something you dont like to do. And just a nit-pic but what was the problem that came with masterbating it wasnt shown clearly.
Hobart
6/3/19, 5:44 AM
great start. can't wait for some changes to kick in
TASS
6/3/19, 5:43 AM
nice building up the story line. keep,on your good work
Plague
6/3/19, 4:42 AM
The way Jake discovers his power is unnatural and forced but I get that the story needs something to kick it off and anything else would have been less sexy. So I'll just say good on you for having written, more than what many can say.
Anonymous
6/3/19, 12:50 AM
this was really hot! definitely want more!
degoetz@yahoo.com
6/2/19, 11:30 PM
Really interested to see where this can go
Anonymous
6/2/19, 10:04 PM
Keep it coming- more involuntary transformations please!
Anonymous
6/2/19, 9:59 PM
I am very keen to read more of this story. All your stories are exceptionally good.
Anonymous
6/2/19, 9:29 PM
More, please!
6/2/19, 8:33 PM
It's a great start and I hope you go back to this one relatively fast so we can see where you take it. (Although based upon where you cut it off my mind has already gone lots of different places.)