Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/3/19, 5:47 PM
great story, wanked myself silly reading it thank you!!
6/3/19, 3:59 PM
Oh fuck, yeah. Great story. Hope to see more of it.
Anonymous
6/3/19, 3:05 PM
Great start!
6/3/19, 2:46 PM
Excellent idea - looking forward to what you will do with it.
May 30, 2019
Anonymous
6/3/19, 2:29 PM
Hey glad to have you back mw-scot! I was a huge fan of you "An Ad Tale" seris hat i just had to read your new ones. Are you going to continue your other series?
V
6/3/19, 12:21 PM
HOT STORY DAMN!
6/3/19, 11:24 AM
The Legion of Super-Pets is perhaps my favorite ridiculous thing that came out of the ADVENTURES era -- the only thing worse is that I can name all of the Super-Pets off the top of my head. (Honestly, when I was a little kid, I LOVED the Super-Pets.) When trying to figure out what I was going to call Chameleon Boy in this story, I was playing around with variants of "shape-shifter" when "protomatter" occurred to me -- but I didn't think I could go so far as to call him "Proty" (the name of his "pet" in the comics), but figured "Proto" served my purposes (and served as a subtle homage). I'm glad someone got it. It's the same way only one person has gotten my "Furball" joke on Tundra Fox. As for the galaxy-wide threat, look at the very first scene in the prologue. Or, if it's too much energy to go backwards, wait for the opening sequence in chapter 8. Worlds will live. Worlds will die. And the Universe will never be the same....
May 24, 2019
The Grand Observer
6/3/19, 7:39 AM
This Story has great potential but it is to rushed to much so to be overlooked. it is most notable when the names get mixed during the transformation sequence. I would like to have read more about James as well as Karl to establish a better relationship so the end has a better pay off , even if it means doing something you dont like to do. And just a nit-pic but what was the problem that came with masterbating it wasnt shown clearly.
Hobart
6/3/19, 5:44 AM
great start. can't wait for some changes to kick in
TASS
6/3/19, 5:43 AM
nice building up the story line. keep,on your good work