Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/1/19, 9:03 PM
****Great story, love the twist in there. Here's hoping master makes Hal bring in his dad.
6/1/19, 7:49 PM
I have a whole rainbow of colours to explore here. :-)
Anonymous
6/1/19, 7:10 PM
okay,, casual nudity and dumbing down, tan, tattoos, what does blue do? and will we see a room that changes their ethnicity?
6/1/19, 6:06 PM
Well done,my friend. The plot and prose more than makes up for the lessened erotic elements. Looking forward to the climax!!
6/1/19, 3:15 PM
Awww... I was hoping you'd continue Bull of the Ranch series.
Anonymous
6/1/19, 3:14 PM
Never thought to see fanfic of that story but this is great
Cigarboy Cody
6/1/19, 2:31 PM
Well I am a long time Legion fan and I love this story. I like the fact that you named Proto Lad after his pet? Sidekick?. Is the Galaxy wide threat a sun eater? Anti- Monitor?. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!
Anonymous
6/1/19, 1:49 PM
i loved it! Please keep it coming! I want to know more about the other slaves and of course about the night with the coach
Anonymous
6/1/19, 1:27 PM
more please!
Anonymous
6/1/19, 1:21 PM
I loved it! cant wait to see mote of Gruff haha