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6/1/19, 6:06 PM
Well done,my friend. The plot and prose more than makes up for the lessened erotic elements. Looking forward to the climax!!
6/1/19, 3:15 PM
Awww... I was hoping you'd continue Bull of the Ranch series.
Anonymous
6/1/19, 3:14 PM
Never thought to see fanfic of that story but this is great
Cigarboy Cody
6/1/19, 2:31 PM
Well I am a long time Legion fan and I love this story. I like the fact that you named Proto Lad after his pet? Sidekick?. Is the Galaxy wide threat a sun eater? Anti- Monitor?. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!
Anonymous
6/1/19, 1:49 PM
i loved it! Please keep it coming! I want to know more about the other slaves and of course about the night with the coach
Anonymous
6/1/19, 1:27 PM
more please!
Anonymous
6/1/19, 1:21 PM
I loved it! cant wait to see mote of Gruff haha
6/1/19, 11:35 AM
Hahahaha! Welcome to the LEGION OF SUPER-HEROES! You've stumbled on the reason it's a cult book -- the main cast alone numbers over two-dozen. And that doesn't get into the secondary heroes (the Legion Academy, The Wanderers, The Substitutes), the villains, and the minor bit characters. I'm sure it's easier with a visual analog, but I've done the best I can to individualize them -- you know how I love a large cast. (Maybe I'll "borrow" a technique from Willie Cici and post a picture link in each chapter?) You've only met the boys (so far) -- wait'll I bring the girls back in chapter 8. Then I blow it all up soon after that and retcon the whole thing -- by then you won't know what the fuck is going on! Hahahahaha! <--- evil villain laugh I knew when I considered writing this that it wasn't going to be everybody's cup of tea -- choosing the LEGION alone guarantees that -- so I decided to write it to please myself and if others enjoyed it, great! I appreciate your level of trust in reading something as long and as weird as this and hanging with it -- I do have a plan. And if you stick with me till the end, you won't be sorry -- especially if you know how much I love satire! Thank you @hypnothrill, for your comments and your support. I shame myself that I read as much as I do on here and comment so little. You're one of my favorites. (And I'm not just saying that to get good reviews!)
Anonymous
6/1/19, 11:01 AM
more, please!!
6/1/19, 8:33 AM
@Touchstone No don't leave us. You're one of the best writer here