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Anonymous
6/1/19, 11:01 AM
more, please!!
6/1/19, 8:33 AM
@Touchstone No don't leave us. You're one of the best writer here
Anonymous
6/1/19, 7:56 AM
Wow, love it! Please write more.
6/1/19, 7:25 AM
I'm really loving the slow mental changes in this chapter, and Val-Or's change of attitude particularly turns me on. But the main problem I've been having with this story is that I just can't keep all the characters straight. I've never read the Legion of Super Heroes comics, so I don't have a clear mental picture of the characters the Horde are based on. And so most of them end up seeming really similar to me; it wasn't until they both showed up in the same scene that I realized that "Energy Boy" and "Electric Lad" were separate characters.
Evan
6/1/19, 6:39 AM
This was really well done. Congratulations on a great story. It had great detail, pacing and the gradual decline into being under control is awesome.
Jul 12, 2014
david
6/1/19, 6:09 AM
Enthralling detail about the devolving final surrender of a new slave. i loved the hazy feeling of the boy's loss of self.
david
6/1/19, 5:24 AM
Great story! You included so many layers to Nathan's subterfuge and the personal perspectives of the characters. The story was incredibly rich in plot and character. i love the way you include so much very real sounding hypnosis script. Thanks so much! Do you have any hypnosis audio or video recordings, or even text scripts available anywhere? Would love to try some.
Anonymous
6/1/19, 4:13 AM
This is great! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/1/19, 12:21 AM
Please continue this story!
Anonymous
5/31/19, 10:42 PM
P.S. I must know - do you fantasize about being the daddy or the boy when you write these?