Recent Comments

Evan
5/30/19, 9:22 AM
I really love this series. And I am especially excited to see the plot threads starting to pull together. Been wondering what has been going on for a while. And there's still a demon thread hanging in the wind except for those magic dildos. Excellent new chapter, thank you. It was quite a surprise to get a lucid Corey. The plot, it thickens! Congratulations on more great writing.
Letswiggle
5/30/19, 8:40 AM
i wiggled to it love itchy ticklish feet
david
5/30/19, 7:53 AM
Thanks for this hot story! i love hypnosis and stories about hypnosis, mind control, or brainwashing. Many of these stories gloss over the techniques used to achieve deep trance/control. You provided a lot of what seemed like very real hypnosis techniques, which made the process and control seem that much more real.
LongtimeFan
5/30/19, 4:39 AM
HOT DAMN! Great story. While I'm not into the whole daddy scene, I've always loved sleep-inducing, gradual removal of resistance hypnosis--and this hit every button on that list. The slow submission, the empty eyes and flat voice, getting so very sleepy...mmmmm. AMAZING.
Chris
5/30/19, 4:35 AM
Topaz, I remember your stories from 15+ years ago on nifty...you have long been one of my favorite authors...creating world's with multiple layers and we'll thought out characters. I for one am excited you are back writing and cannot wait to see where this goes!
CigarMuscle16
5/30/19, 4:21 AM
WOW I LOVED IT
5/30/19, 3:57 AM
Whoa. Great story. I loved the transformation, the resistance, Daddy wrestling coach, Jason resisting bringing Greg to Coach, but obeys and does so. And they lived happily ever after. Oh yeah, and I love how you had Stephen laugh at various times.
5/30/19, 3:16 AM
What a great story! It reminds me a lot of Wrestlr's finest work.
Anonymous
5/30/19, 3:13 AM
Okay,thanks,I'll after i get my work done.^_^
5/30/19, 3:00 AM
Hi! Yes. I suppose that's a fair criticism to make. The story wasn't really ever intended to turn out this way, but the characters came alive on their own and just have been falling together like this. I _have_ been getting a bit caught up in all the plot stuff I have planned, but rest assured, we're going to see more intensely bdsm stuff from Marcus/Imperious at some point in the future. Actually, from what I've got planned, probably in about 2-3 chapters we're gonna get something that you might like. With regard to requests, I take requests from non-patrons as well. It just might take some time for the request to make it out of the queue. Those stories are usually 0.5k - 2.5k words long. If you want anything more involved I _do_ take commissions on a very limited basis. Send me an email at ethan@indieerotica.com if you want to talk about more details.