Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
5/30/19, 4:39 AM
HOT DAMN! Great story. While I'm not into the whole daddy scene, I've always loved sleep-inducing, gradual removal of resistance hypnosis--and this hit every button on that list. The slow submission, the empty eyes and flat voice, getting so very sleepy...mmmmm. AMAZING.
Chris
5/30/19, 4:35 AM
Topaz, I remember your stories from 15+ years ago on nifty...you have long been one of my favorite authors...creating world's with multiple layers and we'll thought out characters. I for one am excited you are back writing and cannot wait to see where this goes!
CigarMuscle16
5/30/19, 4:21 AM
WOW I LOVED IT
5/30/19, 3:57 AM
Whoa. Great story. I loved the transformation, the resistance, Daddy wrestling coach, Jason resisting bringing Greg to Coach, but obeys and does so. And they lived happily ever after. Oh yeah, and I love how you had Stephen laugh at various times.
5/30/19, 3:16 AM
What a great story! It reminds me a lot of Wrestlr's finest work.
Anonymous
5/30/19, 3:13 AM
Okay,thanks,I'll after i get my work done.^_^
5/30/19, 3:00 AM
Hi! Yes. I suppose that's a fair criticism to make. The story wasn't really ever intended to turn out this way, but the characters came alive on their own and just have been falling together like this. I _have_ been getting a bit caught up in all the plot stuff I have planned, but rest assured, we're going to see more intensely bdsm stuff from Marcus/Imperious at some point in the future. Actually, from what I've got planned, probably in about 2-3 chapters we're gonna get something that you might like. With regard to requests, I take requests from non-patrons as well. It just might take some time for the request to make it out of the queue. Those stories are usually 0.5k - 2.5k words long. If you want anything more involved I _do_ take commissions on a very limited basis. Send me an email at ethan@indieerotica.com if you want to talk about more details.
5/30/19, 2:51 AM
Really hot story. Wish there was more!
Anonymous
5/30/19, 2:49 AM
Well...I feel like it's slowly turning from mindcontrol-themed erotica to love romance with only light bdsm element.The first 2 chapters surely left a great impact on my dick while the rest not as much (Honestly,I was expecting some real hot detailed scenes of corey's slave training or maybe other fellow slaves',but ended up in disappointment) becoz I'm such a kinky and twisted perv and "fall from grace" is my all time fav theme.The darker and tougher,the harder my dick.But I do appreciate ur dedicated efforts on character and world building,which other similarly themed erotica lacks,making them so much more vivid and alive that i feel like I was corey instead of a reader and i guess that's why i'm so keen on the slave training scenes coz i've always wanted to be an enslaved superhero/prince.Then finally i feel like this might the one story that could fulfill my fantasy,just too bad it didn't turn out the way i expected.And I know u do commission on patreon and i really want to make a request but I don't have visa card(Qualification is pretty strict in my country )So,I'm wondering do u accept Amazon gift card or something else that i could pay u for requests?
muscledrain
5/30/19, 2:29 AM
I loved the revenge aspect of this! Well done!