Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/29/19, 5:44 AM
love the work hope to see an update to the story soon
LongtimeFan
5/29/19, 4:41 AM
You keep killing! These are the best sex scenes I've read in AGES. And your transformations, as always, are spot on--you have such a great knack for writing characters' voices, and watching them change as the bodies morph captures the mental shifts. And even the hints of deeper feeling are great--that gentle detail about Chris wanting to kiss David, but choosing not to...that's how you make three-dimensional characters. Amazing work!
Anonymous
5/29/19, 4:31 AM
would love to know how the brothers slowly succumb to having sex with each other..
Anonymous
5/29/19, 3:55 AM
Enjoyed it immensely!!!
Anonymous
5/29/19, 3:45 AM
love it. please give this a sequel. I want to see what happens with Mike and Ty
Anonymous
5/29/19, 3:40 AM
You could focus on Jackson or Coach as a prequel or even explore this jock apocalypse-que world, installing an adult figure to fight against Coach. Or, you could explore another universe or different topics too. Hope you will show us what you think is great soon :) Thanks a lot!!
Anonymous
5/29/19, 2:41 AM
im surprised theres no comments yet on this story yet, its so good!
The_Supernatural_D
5/29/19, 1:34 AM
It's meta, and oddly seductive. I like it. I got hard reading it.
5/29/19, 12:41 AM
Excellent sci fi story. Male reproduction with males always intrigues me to include in a story. I was glad to see you take it on and do it well!
Anonymous
5/28/19, 11:57 PM
I think jackson has a lot more to offer to the story then just being a dumb sheep who follows coach orders... Very curious about how jacksons personality will evolve ... for example what if he disobeys coach? Maybe he actually feels sad about what he is doing to those poor nerds... or how does he feel about the faqt that being a jock isnt something special anymore.... ? think he has a lot of potentian as a character!