Recent Comments

Evan
5/27/19, 2:34 PM
Thanks, PupScout! That's a good question. I suspect the Sergeant is not necessarily a one fuckslave sort of man and the others probably have some sort of latent programming waiting to be unleashed when the mood strikes him. So glad you liked the potency of the Sergeant's cum. Hopefully have more stories soon. Thanks so much for the comment.
The grand watcher
5/27/19, 11:25 AM
After reading the first chapter i wanted to read more and this chapter didn't disappoint keeping to the style of the original but adding something new, some might feel it is a little light then the first chapter but what has this chapter has great potenial. I did feel however that the mindcontrol was abit light but other than that it was a great entry and cant wait to read more from you wether it is another entry in this series or a new one.
bikerbro
5/27/19, 4:33 AM
Lemme tell you, I've read a crazy amount of erotic TFs over the years, on a wide range of sites, and not once did I ever come across a story where the sex got me off...til now. There's just something about the way you write it, I can practically feel myself experiencing every act, as both top AND bottom. So, high praise there for someone who's usually only in it for the shift! Speaking of, it's like you're going through all my kinks - the power bottom, the muscle jock { which, lemme say, I LOVE your portrayal of. Much more realistic, human, than the 'hur dur me dum' type } - so, why not continue that streak with a lean rocker, or leather clad 'bad boy'? Seems like the cast could do with someone a li'l' rough around the edges, if you catch my drift. Will be eagerly following this series. Wishing both it and yourself all the best, man.
5/27/19, 4:09 AM
The comments made me check this out, and boy am I glad. Both chapters are super hot, and I gotta agree with the comment above about seeing a classical music major get turned into a rock god. Poor Katie, though. Maybe she'll come under the wing of a butch coach on campus who is running her own indoctrination program on a lesbian fiction site.
5/27/19, 3:17 AM
Thanks all for your kind thoughts! I thought I may as well get some use out of my college experience. Freshman year has been tough!
5/26/19, 10:44 PM
MisterXIX: Glad you are enjoying it. if you have a tumblr or twitter, message me and we can talk more about it both of my names are tyl7897 on them! Yeah I can understand the type of demons/devils but for me if I keep writing like those, I would get bored lol
5/26/19, 10:35 PM
I really like Demonic Sex. It's actually my favorite comic. While I was reading your story I could see the reference to it. The best parts are those were you describe the transformations and were you talk about the character's corruption. Hunks transforming into demons, being corrupted and corrupting others is my favorite fetish. Unfortunately, there aren't many stories, comics or movies based on this kind of things. I was sad when the movie adaption of Demonic Sex got canceled. Since you asked for ideas, I would like to see categories of people, who stereotypically fight for good, turning bad like cops, soldiers or superheros. I also like gyms and bodybuilders, power bottoms and alpha males. I have a thing for muscle growth, leather/rubber, sweat, cum eating, uniforms, pierced nipples so if you are interested in what an enthusiastic reader would like to see in the chapters to come here you have my personal favorites ;) I'm not really into demons with hooves or furry demons. I prefer devils like Patrick Fillion's Deimos but hey! you can't have it all ;p The transformations of Demonic Sex are all really hot especially those at the Street Fair and those of the cops. I hope there will be many chapters to follow. Thanks for that wonderful story and I can't wait to read your next installment!
adaptedman1944@yahoo.com
5/26/19, 9:02 PM
Brilliamt story, had to change my shorts three times whilst reding it..... thanks...... superb.
5/26/19, 6:49 PM
AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! I HOPE THERE WILL BE MANY MORE CHAPTERS TO COME! PLEASE KEEP UP WITH THE STORY! IT'S SOOOOO HOOOOT!!!!
Anonymous
5/26/19, 4:48 PM
love both parts. a suggestion for the next part. the theater program needs a inked up rock star type. maybe a classical music major taking the theater class. gets transformed.