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5/26/19, 6:49 PM
AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! I HOPE THERE WILL BE MANY MORE CHAPTERS TO COME! PLEASE KEEP UP WITH THE STORY! IT'S SOOOOO HOOOOT!!!!
Anonymous
5/26/19, 4:48 PM
love both parts. a suggestion for the next part. the theater program needs a inked up rock star type. maybe a classical music major taking the theater class. gets transformed.
Anonymous
5/26/19, 4:40 PM
Kudos! Another fine chapter.
Anonymous
5/26/19, 4:35 PM
Love the transformation, and the sex scene was brilliant.
5/26/19, 4:30 PM
Great story! Any chance for a role reversal in the next bit? Like a bearish football player and his bodybuilder bro swap bodies and become lovers? You are great at the transformations!
Anonymous
5/26/19, 2:58 PM
Wow! You're a really talented writer! Both parts so far were incredibly well-written and extremely hot! Can't wait do see what you'll do/write next!
Chadwick
5/26/19, 2:13 PM
I hope you will be writing more
LongtimeFan
5/26/19, 1:35 PM
HOT DAMN! Another brilliant chapter! The transformation is my favorite part--you do an awesome job establishing the previous version of David, so the "new" versions seems all the realer and hotter. But my GOD, your sex scene...you sure this is your second time writing this stuff? Because there have been people on this site for YEARS who don't write sex scenes that well. The detail, the language, the vividness...it's achingly sexy. You have a gift! P.S. Why oh WHY didn't my theatre program have this kind of dynamic in college? :p This is the ultimate fantasy for me!
Anonymous
5/26/19, 1:09 PM
Always enjoy a hot muscle jock with a nerdy mousey guy. I can see Benji assisting other jocks with a chapter two, three and four.
nycboot
5/26/19, 1:02 PM
I've been busy and only got to your story now. Wow. Very nice idea! The way you present the difference voices from different eras is so distinctively nice. One can tell when a 1904 voice is speaker (and who), and one can tell the present characters. Your description of the surrounding adds so much to the setting that it feels like a classic novel. The plot is really interesting, leaving this reader constantly wondering will Alex ever find out what happened. (The initial chapters reminded me of the first Star Trek movie where Pia Zadora's body was assimilated by an alien, but so much so that the alien remembered that she was in love with another character...so too, maybe Joseph's memories might emerge... Good going!