Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/26/19, 1:09 PM
Always enjoy a hot muscle jock with a nerdy mousey guy. I can see Benji assisting other jocks with a chapter two, three and four.
nycboot
5/26/19, 1:02 PM
I've been busy and only got to your story now. Wow. Very nice idea! The way you present the difference voices from different eras is so distinctively nice. One can tell when a 1904 voice is speaker (and who), and one can tell the present characters. Your description of the surrounding adds so much to the setting that it feels like a classic novel. The plot is really interesting, leaving this reader constantly wondering will Alex ever find out what happened. (The initial chapters reminded me of the first Star Trek movie where Pia Zadora's body was assimilated by an alien, but so much so that the alien remembered that she was in love with another character...so too, maybe Joseph's memories might emerge... Good going!
Aug 15, 2010
Anonymous
5/26/19, 12:17 PM
Seems a chapter two would be a great addition. I like the characters, the set up.
Anonymous
5/26/19, 11:34 AM
I wish there were more chapters, this series is hot.
Caboose
5/26/19, 8:50 AM
Hot damn does this have some great imagery. i love a good rimming scene and this delivers!
Tass
5/26/19, 8:05 AM
nice plot. Like your transfromation stories since the first one Dominos
Apr 25, 2018
Anonymous
5/26/19, 6:26 AM
awesome, cant wait reading next
ShitPig
5/26/19, 3:51 AM
Fuck, this series was hot!
5/26/19, 3:22 AM
Great story. Intriguing to wonder if Samuels is the only fuckslave for the unit or if they have all been programmed as fuckslaves and the Sergeant decides who he wants at any given time. And I love how even the Sergeant's cum dominates all the others and Samuels can feel and taste the dominance. Great idea!
Anonymous
5/25/19, 10:42 PM
Very hot, is there going to be any more parts?