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Anonymous
5/25/19, 9:04 PM
Soooo hot story, I love when a dad is a forced faggot slave, if only the son were the master.
May 24, 2019
5/25/19, 6:54 PM
I focused more on the transformation rather than their past history. I could have built up the relationship longer to end in a denouement but i like faster paced stories. I don't like doing scenes with harassment of gay or bi men.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/25/19, 6:16 PM
Always love being the slut for many men at one time. Not possible in a mall as in the story, of course, but there are places my true self can come out.
May 24, 2019
Anonymous
5/25/19, 5:37 PM
my critique is a positive one. The premise is good as is the process but it's too short and almost rushed. A longer history of antagonism by James and a former submission by Karl would lead to a more satisfying reversal of roles. And I'd have like to have seen James realise how bad he was and how much he enjoys the thought of being with Karl. And maybe a bit of animalistic need to go with the changes.
5/25/19, 5:20 PM
Wow, being a theatre major really has changed since I graduated.
5/25/19, 4:31 PM
I'm planning on continuing this. In fact I'm working on Chapter 3 right now. This was more inspired by the Demonic Sex gay comic. I was kinda planning on doing a gay version of the black Pharoh comic but with the wider DC Comics (this I'm planning on keeping it in the Arrowverse and crossing over with Supernatural and maybe Teen Wolf). For some variations on demon forms I'm going to use demonic furry forms (such as pigs/boars) and other ideas...If you guys have any ideas let me know of different demon forms or plot, comment here or message me on my twitter @tyl7897 Also to add some more variation, I'm thinking on changing Oliver's demonic form into something else. I have some ideas such as a demonic furry-based but wanted to see if you guys have any ideas that I haven't think of (either furry or other) :)
Anonymous
5/25/19, 3:35 PM
Man, that was interesting. This has a lot of potential too. it would be like the gay vers of Black Pharaoh's comic. please continue this...
Steve
5/25/19, 3:21 PM
So hot and so well written...I would like to sign up for the next seminar, please....
Dec 15, 2013
nyjogger4e@aol.com
5/25/19, 12:56 PM
A great seduction followed by amazingly hot sex. Wish there was a second chapter, but you write so many diverse stories that I guess you don't have the time. My sincere compliments on another brilliant effort.
5/25/19, 9:52 AM
>"Well, dog my shit, look at us!" > LOL -- I had a good friend, a bodybuilder who worked construction -- in a CAT diesel hat no less -- who said that all the time. I thought it was funny. I wonder whatever happened to him? Hopefully transformed like the Budd Bros...