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ForgottenCradle
5/24/19, 7:44 AM
this is so wrong and twisted and I love it
Anonymous
5/24/19, 7:43 AM
And the award for most backhanded compliment goes to ^
Anonymous
5/24/19, 7:37 AM
I loved this! Super hot, it's like you microtargeted my kinks and interests and super well written too, especially for a first story. (As a theatre major the whole thing hit close to home, and I loved the depiction of the dumbing down) Really looking forward to seeing more stories from you in the future!
Anonymous
5/24/19, 7:16 AM
Love it! Having trouble viewing your site though :(
mattersonline
5/24/19, 5:24 AM
That was a ride! Keep it up. You’ve got talent already but I’d like to see what you write after you get some practice.
Anonymous
5/24/19, 5:18 AM
Absolutely brilliant! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
5/24/19, 4:12 AM
Good first story! Good content and well-written. Welcome aboard!!!!
Anonymous
5/24/19, 4:00 AM
The premise and the idea are great. I kept reading the story --- despite the shitty writing style. Sheesh! Run the GrammarCheck. It takes two minutes. You would realize how many errors you committed. For your first effort, you did well with the idea. Edit and polish. You'll do fine for the next.
Anonymous
5/24/19, 3:59 AM
Like the idea that the hynotist is a bottom. Just because he wants to be submissive in bed doesn't mean he should be passive about getting what he wants.
Randmperson2
5/24/19, 3:12 AM
Agreed! I really enjoyed this one and I'm looking forward to future stories from you! Keep it up!