Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/24/19, 3:59 AM
Like the idea that the hynotist is a bottom. Just because he wants to be submissive in bed doesn't mean he should be passive about getting what he wants.
Randmperson2
5/24/19, 3:12 AM
Agreed! I really enjoyed this one and I'm looking forward to future stories from you! Keep it up!
5/24/19, 2:49 AM
At the beginning I thought this was going to be a different character telling the same story as Officer O'Connor. But oh, we had jocks and coaches, with a firehouse as transformation central. Who could ask for more? And the gradual transformation as he wrote in his diary was great. And ending at firehouse transformation central to become a true Musclehead. Perfect!
Anonymous
5/24/19, 12:41 AM
Great debut! Always love a good mental descent. :)
Anonymous
5/23/19, 11:28 PM
maybe you could make a vore universe that would be hot as the devil
tomozco
5/23/19, 11:06 PM
This is getting even more exciting!
matt
5/23/19, 7:32 PM
for a first effort extremely well written, great idea and execution.
Anonymous
5/23/19, 12:26 PM
I agree with dems, wish it was him who topped the daddy. oh well, it's still good though.
Mar 6, 2019
Anonymous
5/23/19, 12:13 PM
green arrow is, canonically bisexual
Anonymous
5/23/19, 11:43 AM
Great story! A writer's note: you switch here between past and present. This is one thing that tends to take me out of the story because I have to keep adjusting my frame of reference (take this with a grain of salt, however; it might just be something that bothers me and no one else). Otherwise, super hot! Keep writing!